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FullMetal Alchemist: BROTHERS 2014

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It took me a few days to do this first I started with Edward which took forever because I wanted him to look a certain way :). Then I started on Alphonse omg took forever because I couldn't get the effect I wanted anyway I hope you like this rendition of FA enjoy, comment and fave and dont forget to check out my gallery I'm sure theres something you will like :)



(C) Drawn by Glass-Owl
(C)Characters by Hiromu Arakawa
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Alright, this is my first critique so it won't be great. I'll start off with the pros:
-Al's armor is modeled very very well.
-Lighting is fantastic and the shading is done well too
-Nice definition on ed's face and neck, many artists will not shade them much but yours is great!
-very good balance and harmonizing colors
-somewhat original because everyone draws them standing or fighting
Alright, on to the cons! there aren't really that many but I have to be picky if you ever want to improve.
-Ed's eyes are golden, yet here they are blue. Perhaps the freedom of the artist, but if so I'd mention that in the descrip.
-Work on hand anatomy. I know it's super difficult. I have to practice like 10 hands for every body I practice. it's hard.
-Ed has black eyebrows, however I understand considering the manga just drew them as lines xD Still, I'd expect at the most a dark brown.

Overall, it's a captivating piece that shows a lot of work put into it as well as very nice shading. Most improvements are just to be canonical when drawing other people's characters, and just to work on hand anatomy.